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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Yet, the right half is an obvious conceptual contrast to the left part in the sense that it alludes to and suggests instability; chaos, disorder and conveys a feeling of unease, something horrible lurking which is a brilliant clash of the two realities.
Since it strives to convey the notions of loss and sorrow following the horrible tragedy in Japan, I believe that this picture renders exactly that: the urge to bring order into disorder, to restore peace and organization.
Personally, I am disgusted by the flood of cheap contributions to deviant art, but at the same time it makes me happy, because the influx of all sorts of creations carries along something remarkable as this, and I praise your vision and your work.
However, I suggest you increase the contrast in terms of shades of grey (no pun intended), to create a stronger and more powerful feel to it.
the next obvious thing worth mentioning here is the use of black and white. i myself am a fan of bw images, when you take color out of the equation the composition, subject, and tone become so very important.
i'm not sure if i am using this phrase right, but theres some negative space in the upper left of the image. if there had been some clouds, or birds to fill that space i think it would have topped off an already great shot. that would be the only thing that stands out to me as something to improve this nice shot.
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